Whoa, nice page. I wonder what Claire's mom'll do when she finds that her daughters under a huge garbage can... ...well, that's if I were Claire. Or Sedah.
Suggestion: See if you can play with spacing the type at all. The hyphened words in the first two panels cut off awkwardly and do not seemlessly transition to the rest of the word. (I thought the bat character was having trouble with using the correct tense with 'improvement' and cutting 'Makin'' seemed more like 'Ma kin'.
It might just be the hyphen given in the font you are using is not visible enough for such things. Like I said, play around with the type.
Perhaps next time, try and arrange the speech lines first and then draw a bubble around them?
It might just be the hyphen given in the font you are using is not visible enough for such things. Like I said, play around with the type.
Perhaps next time, try and arrange the speech lines first and then draw a bubble around them?
Interesting story so far!